Which Hunter

Being concise is one of the standards of superior writing. Unfortunately, when you're writing the first draft of your novel in a month, your mind might insert a lot of "filler" words. I've had this problem for years, but recently have come across a simple solution to help my manuscripts "cut the fluff" during the editing phase. For some background, one of my beta readers for [book:The Third Degree|18141169] noticed the word "that" popping up more often than it should. My solution at the time was to replace most of the "that" with "which". I had always heard the advice "don't use that", so instead of eliminating the word from my writing, I merely shifted it to a different word. Now that I've received notes back on The Constellation Tournament it appears I've been found out. A completely different beta reader was distracted by the enormous amount of times I used "which". Recognizing the problem, I set about trying to find a...
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